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bluebonnet days

on a bluebonnet day
the dew itself just set
as i just wake up
pour my bourbon in a cup
this is as good as i get

on this bluebonnet day
i set in a garden and write
as i clear my mind
i get lost in time
bleeding verse until night

the end of a bluebonnet day
sitting drunk in my own demise
my cares buried deep
i begin to count sheep
to dream of bluebonnet skies

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  1. Date: 3/31/2012 11:42:00 PM

    Dillion, hi.. don't worry you where not rude at all..now let me ask you a question... Are you from Texas??? lol... if you are that explains the poem... all them bluebonnet fields around here... love your poem... I love that bluebonnet image period... favorting this poem...take care..always..pd

    lewis Avatar dillon lewis Date: 4/1/2012 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    im glad you liked it, but im from oklahoma... i was just in texas though, and thats where i got the idea for the poem