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Get It Flying

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Get It Flying

Try try with all our might
This time may we get it right
Another day does come
Still we are all thumbs
Is getting this done right
Really going to be our blight
Another chance is all we ask
Leave other tries in the past
Stop wait are we going to fast
Another let down have we cast
Oh my what a beautiful sight
Finally we learn to fly a kite
Gwendolen Rix contest Lets Go Fly A Kite Poem was written: 09/08/2006

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  1. Date: 8/3/2012 1:17:00 PM

    i like it :) thanks for this poem

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Kites...mysterious, challenging and beautiful. Lovely poem Carol.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 3:09:00 PM

    Believe it or not I never had much luck with those kites! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 5:55:00 PM

    LOL it's a hard thing to get the HANG of and then to get it to STAY UP Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 9:04:00 PM

    Just coming back to this one and I can't see any congrats. Dang . I really liked this one of yours, Carol.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:04:00 AM

    Thats a nice lesson to learn (: I cant wait to teach my niece, though I'm sure theres many more lessons she has to learn first lol. Like Bob said below, I see both lessons here. Thanks for all your comments, and for sharing your beautiful poetry

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 4:13:00 AM

    I wonder how many see the life lesson here and how many only see the kite. Nicely done. Thank you

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 6:05:00 AM

    ah yes the kite of yesteryear, of all that float and fly right here, well done here Carol Brown my sweet, your kite does fly, the verse complete...

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 1:03:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this one Carol.. Hope your week has been a great one and that the weekend will be a relaxing one for you spend with your loved ones.. :) Love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 8:48:00 PM

    Great surmising...hehe...today I was building a porch and steps with all that you said in this poem in mind...a rough day, hehe

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 6:33:00 AM

    enjoyed reading your poems today carol,love patrivk

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 3:49:00 AM

    Really going to be a fight... sounds better to me... lol I remember fighting to get the kite in the air... Sometimes it was difficult. Well a very nice poem there Carol. I have been busy lately. I have some positive news though. 2 of my poems have been published in poetry books. lol

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 12:02:00 PM

    Thanks for commenting on my poems. Thought I should return the favor. Nice litle verse veering towards the humor that I like. Never knew what the ending was going to be but it all fitted in well.

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 6:32:00 PM

    Yes, a kite can be a mixed blessing ..here today goon tomorrow! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 7:51:00 AM

    This is great. I took my kids out to fly kites a month ago and every one question the wind and I told them I can get them up and I did. My children had a blast till the tree got jealous and stole one of the kites.

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 5:30:00 PM

    this brings me back to when i first learned how to fly a kite. i like this poem. I remember messing up and can't wait untill i get it next time. Nice poem

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 7:06:00 AM

    love this sweet piece, carol. belated birthday greetings xx

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Lovely verse Carol, just in time for a windy spring day too. All you need is a blue sky!

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 10:32:00 AM

    love this sweet piece, carol

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:54:00 AM

    flying a kite, or just trying to do anything, when we're able to accomplish it we feel high get to enjoy the sky. lovely poem carol :)

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 5:24:00 PM

    kite flying seems like so much fun, the way you write it little one, well done....S.C.B....

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 12:33:00 PM

    beautiful poem very well written I feel like an amateur compared to you I like the rhyming thank you for your comments on poems worlds apart and no deeper meaning I still have more to come more epic will read more of yours nice picture by the way

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 11:48:00 AM

    This is actually how it goes when you try to fly a kite and finally we managed to get it up in the air and flying. Loved it. Love always, Gail

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 8:22:00 PM

    You're a brilliant poet, Carol. I enjoyed reading your poems, too. Thanks for the comments. Take care always.

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 8:04:00 PM

    Very cute for her contest, Carol.

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 3:34:00 PM

    Wow! I didn't even realize this was going to be about a kite until I got to the last couplet. Way to go, Carol! Winning wishes for you in Gwen's contest. Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 3:19:00 PM

    Flying a kite has its hardships! I'm glad you finally got a kite up and flying, it's a real joy to see one up in the air my friend! I just love your poem Carol! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 2:10:00 PM

    loved flying kites... it was fun... always....Joseph

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 1:54:00 PM

    such special words of delight Carol.. makes me think of times ,y sons and I flew kites at the beach.. think they still do.. and we might buy one this Summer too..at the seashore there is a kite contet.. your words would be a great inspiration to all the participants luv.. good luck ..