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Dance Across the Sky

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Dance Across the Sky

                                               as the sun 
                                          dances cross the 
                                       sky o'er blue my tail 
                                    flapping in the wind I live
                                I say goodbye to the earth free
                               floating, breaking from my string,
                                 dancing further than east from
                                    west, sun from moon, ever
                                      my colors to soar above
                                        lands, I cannot begin
                                          my flight too soon,
                                            a kite is meant
                                              to fly, said I
                                 H                  G
                                 G                H
                                  I.   A        E
                                  H N H T R  

 Dedicated to all the wonderful poets on Poetry Soup. I cannot choose one. I only started my journey here not too long ago, and I have received so much amazing support. So thanks to everyone who takes the time to give a kind word. Lots of love to all. :))   

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  1. Date: 4/19/2012 6:28:00 PM
    Well who could help you..such a sweet, kind & loving person yourself!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:57:00 PM
    A wonderful journey with your Kite and congratulations on your winning place Rhonda xx

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this high flyer of a well placed contest write Rhonda..)

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 1:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 10:04:00 PM
    congratulations Rhonda!! well done my dear friend!! beautiful...big hugs,love deb

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:14:00 PM
    wow! you really nailed the shape on this one and it sounds great, too! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 6:35:00 PM
    A footloose and fancy free shape poem, Rhonda! Congrats on your placement in my contest...your work is always appreciated by ME!! Wonderful personification. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 5:38:00 AM
    Wonderful Rhonda--The most frustrating part is when you post it it changes form and you have to work it back to shape again!! Well done !

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 1:52:00 PM
    wow. very exciting work, you've stretched creativity in thought and form, good for you, chuck

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Lots of love coming back to you,Rhonda!:)) Very creative and awesome poem my friend.Great dedication to the Soupers.Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 10:25:00 AM
    Love the personification and the shape, Rhonda. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 9:49:00 AM
    Oh well done Rhonda..awesome shape it xxx Hugs