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Heartbeat

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The noise around fills my ears, 
But still, 
I'm oblivious to my surrounding. 

In a peaceful place I lay , 
With you in my arms , 
My heart filled with love and comfort .

But yet , 
I can't feel a heartbeat , 
Afraid my candle maybe blown out , 
And I lay in the clouds of heaven .

I hear your whisper, 
"my heart beats for you ". 

Then and there I knew , 
You stole my heart :)

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  1. Date: 3/30/2012 3:55:00 AM

    So sad, cry a tear for you Pavitra - like it my friend. - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Muthiah Avatar Pavitra Muthiah Date: 3/30/2012 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you do ? thank you very much ! :)