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Pain

My eyes open to only shut again,
As for my heart gains speed,
Only to someday stop.
Tears come and tears go,
Waiting for the next down pour.
They say a heart grows,
Perhaps for the most pain possible
when It finally shatters…
Love and hate, passed through us all.
A life is born, while a new death arises.
Why be born into a world of pain?
You learn to grow numb and weak anyway..

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  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:16:00 PM
    A painfull tragic feeling well expressed. Congratulations on being featured this week, and on an excellent piece, also. - Chuck

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 7:11:00 AM
    enjoyed your lovely poem this morning and congrats on this feature...Patrick

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 12:47:00 AM
    Great job Brittany... That's life...

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 4:50:00 AM
    Where did this week go I wonder again. But hey I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Brittany. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and happiness. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup Brittany, hope you will read, comments and write alot of poem here. You do it well,have a lovely day. - Hello from Norway and Anne-Lise

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    Date: 3/29/2012 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hoping u have a good day as well :) so far I think this site is amazing!