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Not too Late to Change




Forbidden lipstick;
Detrimental to the soul
Powerful than any sword
A near death foretold;
Changes in lifestyle took place
Thanks to God's amazing grace

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  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:22:00 PM

    I hope one day I'll be as talented in writing as you are. So much was heard with only little to be seen. Very good, very good indeed.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 7:57:00 PM

    This is beautiful!! We have to all be grateful for His amazing grace...

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/7/2012 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes indeed madam...that's so true!!! Hugs.. :)
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:24:00 AM

    G Pace, your poetry is getting better and better... love this one...pd

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/7/2012 6:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD...always a pleasure to hear from you!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:48:00 AM

    "God is good, god is great in all of us... love the way you express words from the heart. there the best wouldn't you agree.... HUGS!!!!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes maam, indeed he is!!!!
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 10:43:00 AM

    This is the best poem, i've read all day' excellent imagery

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/1/2012 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha ha ha... and he means this comment... I know Nathan is very picky... I'm glad he enjoyed this one as I did...
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/24/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Nathan for stopping by!! After reading your work I'm honored!!!
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 10:57:00 PM

    Hmmm, I can interpret this in more ways than just the one way. I mean, there is more than meets the eye to this story. Reminds me of myself years ago. Forbidden lipstick and the Wutang sword. I barely made it out of the Shoalin shadows alive. Never too late to change. Btw, when you see the form "Choka"....don't it make you think about saying: "Immah gonna CHOKA you!" Ha ha!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/20/2012 2:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are really amazing..lol An honor for you to share your comments..thank you..too funny!! And yes it does sound like that, now that you brought it to my attention.."Immah gonna CHOKA you."!!
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 4:49:00 PM

    yes I agree! God and his amazing grace.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes maam!!
  1. Date: 4/2/2012 5:42:00 PM

    Love you poem G. Welcome to the soup by the way. Look forward to reading your future poetry. PS: Thank you for nice comments on my poems as well. Hugs, Gail

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gail!!
  1. Date: 3/28/2012 11:37:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon G. I am reading today and hoping to find some inspiration to write. I had a run a week or so ago and now it wimped out on me. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol!!
  1. Date: 3/27/2012 6:55:00 PM

    This is hot.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 3/27/2012 12:25:00 PM

    This is great . Keep on writing !!!! ~Akira~

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 3/27/2012 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sweetheart!! muah