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Impress me

Impress me

So impress me,

tell me something new,

not the fairy tail I all ready know,

I am the one,

you need to impress now

so tell me the story

tell me the truth,

tell me something new,

that you even didn't know,

So,impress me

I am open to you're heart.

And will listen the tone of you're voice

will let you in my heart.

So impress me with something completely new, 
out of the blue.

Ivy

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 5:44:00 PM

    I love this one mommy. (: It's my favorite.

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 5/22/2012 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you mila, mom
  1. Date: 5/19/2012 5:08:00 PM

    Lovely written poem here!!!

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 5/22/2012 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear Pace,Ivy
    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 5/20/2012 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanx,dear friend,for your time and comment,Ivy
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 2:22:00 AM

    This has the makings of a beautiful song, do you make music?

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 5/20/2012 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear Sameer for taking time to read my work,I appreciate your comment,Ivy
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 10:52:00 AM

    been there done that.

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 5/20/2012 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    dear John thank you for stopping by,Ivy
  1. Date: 4/2/2012 7:32:00 PM

    Impressive poem! :)

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 5/20/2012 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear Jessica,for taking time to read my work,I appreciate your comment,Ivy
  1. Date: 3/26/2012 6:03:00 PM

    Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 5/20/2012 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by, I appreciate your comment ,Ivy
  1. Date: 3/26/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Like this poem Ivy, tell the truth...yes. - oxox Anne-Lise

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk Date: 3/26/2012 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne,Ivy