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THE WINTER HAS FROZEN MY HEART

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THE WINTER HAS FROZEN MY HEART





                                    The winter has frozen my heart.
                                         My heart is cold and hard, 
                                       all my creativity has dried up.
                   The wind, the storms have blown away my inspriation and ideas.
                             The darkness has put a lid on the verse and rhyme.
                                              But now spring is here, 
                                         and the heart begins to thaw, 
                                         and creativity begin to sprout.
                                         The wind, the storms are over, 
                      now it's just a breeze that whispers of inspiration and ideas.
                                  The darkness has gone over to the light, 
                                        which flashes of verse and rhyme.



                                               .....                    .....
                                      ,ad8PPPP88b,         ,d88PPPP8ba,
                                    d8P"            "Y8b, ,d8P"           "Y8b
                                  dP'                      "8a8"                 `Yd
                                 8(                           "                      )8
                                  I8                                                  8I
                                    Yb,                                            ,dP
                                       "8a,                                      ,a8"
                                           "Yba                             adP"
                                               `Y8a                     a8p'
                                                   `88,               ,88'
                                                        "8b         d8"
                                                          "8b     d8"
                                                            `888'
                                                                "

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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Magical writing bout weather :) Loves the heart :)

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/30/2012 2:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by, apreciate it! oxox Laila
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 2:21:00 PM
    Wow....weeee! This one is smokin hot with great compliments,,,I don't think this is a true poem at all bc your creativity is still wonderful and alive...the metaphors are strong tho' and I love your poetic art...Hey, stop over to my blog to see your mom's poem, would ya please?...wink wink. Gwendolen

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/29/2012 3:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi! Thanks for stopping by Gwendolen and for good fedbak! Yes, I will visit your blog ;0) xoxo - Laila
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 6:17:00 PM
    Yes we do have quiet reflective times and then the seeds of thought start to form into gems- lovely, Brenda

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by. xoxo - Laila
  1. Date: 4/8/2012 12:32:00 PM
    nice to see you penning again, laila... touching piece so well done.. wow!.. your heart spins :) hggs!

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading my poem! xoxo - Laila
  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:50:00 AM
    i don't think the winter could freeze up that creativity. and i love the heart :D enjoyed reading.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/8/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visit and comments my poem Jessica. - oxox Laila
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 4:29:00 PM
    Hello Laila - Enjoyed reading your poem very much! I am glad that your heart is thawing and your creativity is beginning to grow again. Sometimes it is hard to keep writing when circumstances push them into hibernation. - Gail

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/8/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visit and coments my poem Gail. - oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 3/27/2012 5:07:00 AM
    Well done, welcome back Laila. Love from: IVAN,ADRIAN,MAILO,MAYA.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/8/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello my boys.....thanks for visit mom in P-Soup. - oxox love mum
  1. Date: 3/26/2012 6:31:00 PM
    Wonderful poem! I enjoyed reading every word of it.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/8/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Shirley, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Laila
  1. Date: 3/26/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Nice parallel between the human condition and the spring thaw. I enjoyed this very much.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 4/8/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ann, thank you for visit and coments my poem. - oxox Laila