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When I Want

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When I Want

When I want
more than I have to offer
the world looks hostile and
dangerously antagonistic.

When I offer
more than I want
the world looks hostile and
dangerously antagonistic.

Somehow the second scenario
feels better to me.

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  1. Date: 3/28/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Good thoughts to consider here Nancy..)

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 2:47:00 PM

    food for thought! nice one!

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 10:17:00 PM

    Ja-ja, the second scenario is a better bitter pill to swallow.