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The Surreal

“The Surreal”
A blue-grey house atop a hill,
Molding and shaping to its creator’s will.
/A green, hilly peak with nothing below,
Pressed against a sky of sorrow.
/Grey and brown trees line the ground,
Twisted, and tangled with no life to be found.
/In the house a light appears,
Tiny, and dim, but showing no fears.
/Soon more lights flicker on,
Enough light now to mimic the dawn.
/The light bursts out of the warped windows,
Breaking through the sky to defeat its foes.
/The once dreary scene, dark and dead,
Bursts with life and extinguishes dread.



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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 11:38:00 AM

    I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Alex. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 11:30:00 AM

    Alex - I like it very much, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise