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As One Together

moon and stars above
warm summer night breeze blowing
arms wrapped around me
closeness makes my body weak
your breath, the warm breeze, I melt
our hearts together
beat now as one forever
till death do us part
A Mesh Of Forms Contest of Russell Sivey Written by Carol Brown 03/22/2012 Using the forms Tanka & Senryu 1st Place Winner

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  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:29:00 AM

    wonderful :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 6:11:00 AM

    This is a beautiful poem...it reminds me of my poem till death do us apart.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 1:28:00 PM

    nice peace the words say it all x david scott

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 4:35:00 AM

    wow Carol - short and very sweet - loved it.

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 8:33:00 PM

    refreshing... very beautiful!

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 10:08:00 AM

    I have no expression for this one except saying lovely poem of two hearts together. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 1:43:00 PM

    nice a d ty for the welcome carol

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:42:00 PM

    Oh I love this poem,,, I can see why it won first place ;} very nice Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 3:02:00 PM

    Very beautiful Carol, Congrats on your first Place win ;0)

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 5:56:00 AM

    A beauty Carol, congratulations on your first place win with this awesome piece :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 8:49:00 PM

    Isn't it so simple to love!! Carol, you've beautifully shown the pureness of this divine feeling.. Congrats on a very well deserved win and love always !!!

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Carol, congrats on your 1st place win with this lovely, romantic write! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Beautiful. Congrats on your win Carol:)

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:07:00 PM

    Thank you everyone. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:39:00 AM

    Awww...Congratulations Carol!!! Great win!!! big huggsss,love deb

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 6:44:00 PM

    Truly lovely. Congratulations on your first place win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 6:31:00 PM

    So romantic Carol!! Congrad's on your win Light & love

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 4:45:00 PM

    Another beauty Carol :) Congratulations on your winning entry Love, Jon

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 3:19:00 PM

    Congrats Carol on your win great poetry hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 8:40:00 AM

    congrats Carol on a grand first place win for Mesh of Forms contest with a truly brilliant expression of words.. trust u enjoyed a lovely Easter day in Resurrection Power luv..

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 6:02:00 AM

    A very nice poem. I felt it :)

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 12:40:00 PM

    Thank you for this poem Carol! Sometimes it seems the fewest of words can have a most profound impact on emotion. x Peace, Ruby

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 9:17:00 PM

    wow, this is beautiful Carol. good luck on the contest

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 1:27:00 PM

    So lovely Carol, your tanka and Senyru flowed together beautifully, best of luck in the contest

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Well you meshed more than just forms...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my work..Have a great afternoon and evening..Sara

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 10:42:00 AM

    This was a terriffic poem!... Keep it up!... Thanks for your comment on my poem...

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 9:45:00 PM

    this is fantastic. I think you are on a very good poetic roll with these two I have just seen.

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 2:48:00 PM

    So good to read this thoughtfull and discriptive write Carol..)

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 12:22:00 PM

    so romantic! i really love the last line of your tanka. also how it flows yet shifts into something deeper in the haiku. good luck in the contest :)

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