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Jerusalem


 Jerusalem...Jerusalem
 I promise...I promise
 I will reply for the call
 I promise...I promise
 I will bring down the wall
 I promise...I promise
 I will defeat the devils
 I promise...I promise
 With an army countless
 Like pebbles
 I promise...I promise
 To finish the goal
 I promise...I promise
 I will reply for the call
 I promise...I promise

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Yes, almost all the Traitors leaders of all the countries were promising that...,but guess they are falling one by one....Regards,

    Eastman Avatar Carol Eastman Date: 10/15/2012 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Some how I don't think the whole Middle east in it's Arab Spring has accomplished much. Killed a lot of good people to replace bad leaders with probably more bad leaders. Violence is seldom the answer. A dictator or tyrant is still a dictator and tyrant no matter who they replace.
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 3:44:00 PM

    a LOT of promises. they have decieved you.

    Hamad Avatar Hammam Hamad Date: 5/22/2012 2:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Mr.John ... at the end of days every Bad president will fall ... and as you know I'm from Libya and our x-leader"Algadafi" the tyrant was Non-Muslim...His aunt is living in Israel...did that sound fishy here.
    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 5/21/2012 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    they been promising that sence 1948.
  1. Date: 3/22/2012 12:44:00 PM

    Alot of promise Hammam....well done. :) - oxox Anne-Lise

    Hamad Avatar Hammam Hamad Date: 3/22/2012 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yep , me and almost all the Muslims think that way. We will eventually do it . It's a promise(^^). Regards,