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Atmospheric blizzard chills downrightly entire field Gelid herbage in jeopardy keeps lengthening mortal numbness On poignant quietude raging snow threatens unprotected vegetation Wintry Xmas... yonder zest
Footnote: Yonder as distant, separated in space or coming from or going to a distance.

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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 9:27:00 PM

    Hey, not bad. Check out my work, Alphabt Constructs 3 2 1 and tell me what u think. Dave. Sorry, I have committed the ultimate poetic sin and asked fora comment. Please disregard.

    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 3/28/2014 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No. It is bad. : D ... really bad. But ... it's an ABC poem. : D
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 4:54:00 PM

    This are FUN and you sure did it justice. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Ruben, you must have changed the text here from what it used to be because my comment makes no sense what I said before to this. Anyway, this is hilarious! and I saw the frog thing finally. What a laugh riot!!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Hey hey hey..that snow which treathens mother nature..that Wintry Xmas in yearn for yonder zest... A difficult abc form which you outdid splendidly--bravo-Charma

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Fun write Ruben---But we have to make you Irish since it's still March ---so O'Ruben!!

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 8:58:00 AM

    congrats on your placement

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 5:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 1:08:00 AM

    Excellent Ruben, a worthy winner xx

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 10:25:00 PM

    Hey way to go here. I think this would be VERY difficult for you to do and you really pulled it off quite well, Ruben. I mean, to do an ABC poem for me in Spanish would not be easy. Your sentences were pretty well put together compared to some that I saw. BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 5:39:00 PM

    Oh you Ruben..so glad to see you posting again...congrats. BG

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 2:30:00 PM

    A great entry Ruben. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:58:00 PM

    A beautiful job on this entry Ruben. Congratulations on your wonderful win. I wouldn't have been able to judge this contest, cheers to Yasmin for doing such a great job.

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:47:00 PM

    congrats Ruben on a fantastic win for this excellent write in ABC on snow.. a glistening beauty luv..

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:29:00 PM

    Congratulations Ruben!!! on your win!! Well Done! Big Huggsss,love~deb

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Hey hey hey! Another great ABC poem! Good luck in the contest, Ruben. Super challenging, I must say! :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 3:20:00 AM

    What a great ABC. Should do well in the contest. Good luck my friend. I wasn't able to think of anything for Y and Z when I wrote mine. God Bless and thanks so much for reading my newest post "Plainly Speaking". Actually I speak from bitter experience there but it's good to know I have good company. (smile) People often take my words out of context simply because they don't think about what we are speaking about at the moment apply my words to the topic of the conversation. JB

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 9:25:00 PM

    Brrrrrrr!!!! Ruben, what creativity you posess! This was not an easy challenge and you have done exceptional...I like how you have put each ABC in bold...as well...I like this very much...good luck in the contest...big huggsss,love~deb

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Ruben, this is quite a challenging contest and I must say you captured winter very well in true ABC form. I love the line "on poignant quietude. What a feeling I get when I read those words. Best wishes in the ABC contest. (Of course you can see heaven from a witty perspective -- just don't want dark poems about hell.) Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 12:05:00 AM

    A great abc poem Ruben .. Somehow describing the cold weather making a disaster of vegetation.. A Wintry Xmas so in distance from that zest then states much more.. Charma

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 10:20:00 PM

    Awesome ABC Ruben it gives me chills just reading it xxx Hugs

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 3:31:00 PM

    Lemon zest cupcakes comes to mind......very sweet tart! Great ABC work!! Yonder bakery with lime cupcakes beckons me......

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 2:42:00 PM

    Wooow .....nicely done Ruben, lovely. Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 9:57:00 AM

    this has to be one of the best i've read, Ruben. you really bring home to the reader the wintry affect. harry

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:17:00 AM

    Absolutely chilling read !! Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:00:00 AM

    LOL very good Mr. O and so many big YUMMY words! Do a blog please on how to make 1 letter bold? Teach me! Light & love

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 1:26:00 AM

    Gosh Ruben, this is just stunning and you made it look so easy too :) thank you for checking up on my side.. Promise to have a look at more of yours over the weekend. You really made me laugh with some of your comments :) *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 12:29:00 AM

    Wowee, you sure wrote a great abc that speaks of so much imagery! Really enjoyed this and I like how you made this flow, not forced at all..Great job on a challenging form for me :) -- Very Cool (haha pun intended) write! :)

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 6:24:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this creative work..A form that is not very easy to write..Sara

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 5:49:00 PM

    keeps lengthening mortal numbness... love this line. a well written poem you got here, Ruben. wonderful!

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 3:57:00 PM

    i float with you, ruben, shivering with delight!.. best wishes and huggs! :)

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