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Couplet

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Couplet

Don't hold it against me
                         
              that
                              I 
                               want
                                        to 
                                            be
                                               held
                                                     by
                                                        you.

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  1. Date: 3/31/2012 4:29:00 AM
    Wonderful winner here, Talena, i'm a bit late, but reading this i'm glad i dropped by. harry

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 9:00:00 AM
    congrats on your placement

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 7:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in David's "Chiasmus" contest Talena. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 8:21:00 PM
    Congrats on your Big win, Talena! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 6:03:00 PM
    Makes you think hmmmm. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 5:19:00 PM
    Super duper awesome win. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 4:45:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Talena!!! Well Done! big huggsss,love~deb

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 4:42:00 PM
    very well done play on words, and grat visual.

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 4:09:00 PM
    Nicely done, not only the words, but such an intriguing format!! Well done~!!

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 3:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win! I like how your words mimick the idea - like the first line is a barrier and the bottom half is like you reaching out to him. Great idea :)

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 3:44:00 PM
    way to go Talena on a wonderful frst place win for fantastic words luv..