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A Little About ME


                           Twenty-eight, and has lived longer than fifty
                                   Need not tell me any fairytales
                                            For I'm an author
                                                      Of
                                                    Many
                                                    
                                                    FALL
                                                 Not short;
                                             For you are walking
                                      Close to the edge, and in due
                           Time, any false move will cause damage to ALL

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:13:00 AM

    like your message here, Pace, these are wise words of philosophy, awesome...

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 10:52:00 AM

    This is good. I like it and I won't tell you any fairytales. You are alright in my book. Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:32:00 PM

    The form, the words, the point...all wonderful!! I love this poem!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 8:32:00 AM

    you are quite the creative poet Pacey..your last one quite got to me...ehem!

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:10:00 AM

    Great write,love the shape you inspired me to do my Tree of Life,love your styles,author G "INK",the G stands for great

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:11:00 AM

    ha..i love your first line...your lived 28, but managed 50 = clever line.... :-) look out for that spherical journey. xox~pd

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:52:00 AM

    nice poem

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 10:32:00 PM

    The first line seems true... I like the first upside-down pyramid... I like the following pyramid as well!!! Your not one to be messed with

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/6/2012 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..too funny...Thank you Brittany!!
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Very nice poem into your mind! I also wanted to thank you for your kind comments on my work. It is greatly appreciated. Always, Laura

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/30/2012 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you!!
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 4:04:00 AM

    Im from the Ghetto so I'm used ta' that, look on yo muh fuggin map and find Texas and see where Houston at/ It's on the borderline of hard times..." GETO BOYS.....5th Ward...Htown Knockin boot...PeACE

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for sharing your comments!!
  1. Date: 3/24/2012 1:39:00 PM

    This poem sounds sad. It made me think of my actions and how they relate to those around me.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's good that it made you think beautiful!!!
  1. Date: 3/21/2012 10:24:00 AM

    So much said here..keep the pen flowing .. Charma

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for sharing!!
  1. Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 PM

    Eal talk

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/18/2012 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sir!!
    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Real