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CAMELOT

CAMELOT


In nonesuch age was there a world so fair
Wherein the rule of justice led the way
All men could prosper with good work and care
With  sun and law and honor every day
Twelve good men true gave all an equal share
In nature’s bounty,   and held careful sway
An ideal place and evil there was not
The myth impossible of Camelot


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Written by Sydney Peck
Entered  in Nette Onclaud's  Contest   MOMENT IN ANOTHER TIME

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  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Moment In Another Time" contest Sidney. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 3:33:00 AM

    a real KC, syd... king of camelot rides high... lyrical piece so fair!.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 1:34:00 AM

    Congratulations Sydney this is a beautiful poem xx

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:33:00 AM

    Congratulations Sydney on your well deserved win!! It also "never rains 'till after sundown"...lol Well done ...big huggsss,love deb

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 7:54:00 PM

    Wonderful ottava rima for this contest. Gosh, I have to get really busy on mine!!! that last line was so true: myth impossible.

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 4:55:00 PM

    Very clever, using the none such age as your favorite time. Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 2:07:00 PM

    Wow...this is wonderful Sydney! I haven't even thought of where to go with this contest, but you've done a fantastic job!

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 12:13:00 PM

    I thought about doing a Camelot piece. I'm so glad I didn't. Yours is terrific. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 11:28:00 AM

    Your title caught my attention the poetry kept it, great entry Sidney, hugs vie

    Beck Avatar Sidney Beck Date: 3/20/2012 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you often make the sweetest comments and i want you to know I appreciate them very much......am not great at writing a lot -- cos just too busy with work kids etc .....best wishes to you Vienna