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MOM I LOVE YOU

My eyes follow as my left hand orchestrates my thoughts with an ink pen
Of memories, past and present, good and bad that you have embedded within
My heart palpitates when you are near as you billow with love again and again

I promise to be with you in the stormy weather as the dark skies descend

Live life every sec, min, and hour with you without fearing when our time will end
Oh what a blessing you have been to me amongst endless pain, agony and sin
Verily I say, thanks for the seed that has formed my vital structures to speak herein
Everyday is a new beginning, yet you continue to march along the strongest wind

Yield not from my heart, for you are the cause and effect of beast becoming men
Others have gone before you, lead the way for your hands were made to lend
Unending love and protection you have as long as I'm your Officer and Gentle-Men


Pace, G.

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  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:21:00 PM

    Just lovely, your word play is strong and effective and I like the unusual structure of this one as well...D

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:03:00 PM

    Mothers are great. they love, hug, kiss, worry, and gives advice. I find this poem to be a great tribute towards mothers. What a wonderful thing to read. My mom is gone on to be with the Lord but she's missed every day. So cherish your mom every chance you get. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Pace .. congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always *PD

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/17/2012 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!! And today is her Birthday!!! Happy Birthday Mom!!! Smiles..kisses...hugs!!!!
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:55:00 PM

    Congrats on the feature, Fam! Burner!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/17/2012 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks fam!!!
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:28:00 PM

    What a job it is to be a mother...what a beautiful tribute to yours. She is lucky to have you! Well written Ink...

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 7/30/2012 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I agree Doreen...thank you so much beautiful!!!
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:03:00 AM

    Almost nurturing a final thought on this one. I bet your mother is proud to have the best you can offer. As a mother I await my little men to understand all the stormy weathers and dark skies around me. maybe then they will be thankful.. excellent poem...pd

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 7/30/2012 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So true...love your comment PD!! Huggs!!
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 1:04:00 PM

    Beautifully written. <3

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/19/2012 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you beautiful!!! Always
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 8:07:00 PM

    IM SPEECHLESS! THIS POEM WAS AMAZING.<3

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/28/2012 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!!
  1. Date: 5/25/2012 10:01:00 PM

    " very touching tribute to A mother's undying and endless love." Loved it!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/28/2012 5:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes maam..thank you dearly!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Ohhh, love it. Say hello to mom from me. Happy Mother's Day. Toquyen

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And indeed I will thank You!!
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:33:00 PM

    This is a nice tribute to your mother and well orchestrated.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:31:00 PM

    This is a nice tribute to your mother and well orchestrated.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/22/2012 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow!! Thank you for stopping by and sharing your kind words!! hugs
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 5:19:00 PM

    Beautiful!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 4/2/2012 11:01:00 PM

    WuRD! Dear Mama! SwaGG.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!! lol
  1. Date: 3/24/2012 1:42:00 PM

    What a blessing, Thanks for sharing your gratitude and love with your audience.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you beautiful!!
  1. Date: 3/21/2012 11:20:00 AM

    nice

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!!
  1. Date: 3/19/2012 1:18:00 PM

    I love this piece

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!!