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POINT of VIEW

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Below is the poem entitled POINT of VIEW which was written by poet Umme Salma Alam. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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POINT of VIEW

"I see a flower.
‘Daffodil’ I call it.
A gift to my crystal vase."
Her eyes smile
Like a sun-poured flower.

“I see a devil.
‘Human’, they call them.
Goodbye to my mother earth.”
Her petals shine like frozen tears .

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  1. Date: 3/24/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Very nicely written. Thank you adding your creation to the soup. Love this one. Write on please.

    Alam Avatar Umme Salma Alam
    Date: 3/26/2012 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Inspiring! thanks!
  1. Date: 3/20/2012 8:58:00 AM
    Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Umme. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol

    Alam Avatar Umme Salma Alam
    Date: 3/26/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Carol! How are days going for you?Thanks a lot for your appreciation!
  1. Date: 3/19/2012 8:37:00 AM
    sad thoughts this am...well written!!

    Alam Avatar Umme Salma Alam
    Date: 3/26/2012 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading Doris !:)