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HORSES

                          HORSES

Hooves, with majestic rhythm pound the ground
Off the beat'n path. Roam'n wild, roam'n free
Refined in grace, loyal, noble. So missunderstood
Stunning in appearance, with mane and tail adrift
Enchantedly each strand of hair, dances in the wind
Spirited, radiant, dynamic in every way.

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  1. Date: 4/6/2012 2:23:00 PM
    Just stopping by, can read about horses anytime and yours fills me with those dancing hooves!

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 5:57:00 AM
    My vision of horses too. I can see them as you paint the picture with your pen. Beautifully done Melanie. :)

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 7:58:00 AM
    Part of American history. There'd be no cowboys without horses. Beautiful intelligent animal.

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 9:56:00 AM
    I love this! Acrostic poems are difficult to tackle and you do it beautifully here. You have a real talent for imagery - Your descriptions are so clear in my mind. Well done! Take care, Heather

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/23/2012 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading my poem. It is comments like this, that encourages me to keep on writing.
  1. Date: 3/21/2012 6:03:00 PM
    This is short, but i like it. Itis a nice acrostic poem. Lucilla

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/21/2012 7:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You for viewing my poem.
  1. Date: 3/20/2012 10:19:00 AM
    Wonderful poem on these majestic creatures. Love the second last line enchanted--dances in the wind. love phyl

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/21/2012 7:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks yet again, for reading my poems.
  1. Date: 3/19/2012 6:03:00 PM
    I appreciate this poem very much. Horses are magnificent creatures and you have written this marvelously. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/20/2012 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You for reading my poem. Horses truly are magnificent creatures. I've been facinated with them, since a very young age.
  1. Date: 3/18/2012 8:22:00 PM
    Melaine, love your acrostic,, very dynamic.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/18/2012 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You for viewing my poem. I'll be sure to visit your poems.