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  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:17:00 PM
    Very pleasant little moral (& clever)... Terry

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 7:40:00 PM
    Love the Word Play! Pride does often get in the way of forgiveness. Not a good thing when it does.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 1:37:00 PM
    nr. one: HONESTY and FORGIVENESS !!! - Have a lovely weekend John! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 9:22:00 PM
    i love it...good luck in the contest...pd

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 2:06:00 PM
    Very well written wisdom my friend! Forgiveness is the key...Should be a winner! :o)

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 12:32:00 PM
    what a great piece for the contest - short and powerful :) p.s. thanks for your hilarious comment on my t-rex poem, lol!

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 10:55:00 AM
    Awesome John, lots of deep feeling here, wonderful to read. good luck. harry

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 7:32:00 AM
    Love this John it says it all, well don and all the best in the comp. Thank you for taking the time to read all my poems the other day annd commenting, it is very much appreciated xx

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 5:30:00 PM
    Nice write about forgiveness John, winning wishing for you, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 1:22:00 PM
    The graveyard of broken hearts grows ever more large with this one John. An age old problem beautifully told! All the best in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 12:38:00 PM
    BRAVA!!!John...Brava!! Very well written...I thought you were talking about territory that ole heart is...Good luck in the contest!!! and Congrats on your win in "Finish This Verse"!!!Well Done...big hugggss~Deb~

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 11:26:00 AM
    What a lovely piece John. Good Luck x