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The Fluorescent Roof

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The Fluorescent Roof

Fields grow in a tantrum of noise, lightened up eyes rush towards the glint,
Twisted strands and torn seams, fixed stares and pennies for the well.
A shadow upon your silhouette and covered from the sun, circled by absense.

An ethereal night, fluorescence lit a ladder to the roof.
Sculpted from the forest, and blown from the wind,
Sat in a fog of absolute serenity, hours still to gracefully fall.

Stems spiral as the moonlight shines blissfully and bright,
Like undressed eyes glued to a delicate painting, 
Showered in essence, we sit, and we glow.

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  1. Date: 3/16/2012 6:03:00 AM

    I love your writing Shannon, it's like peeling away layers and layers of sheer curtains only to arrive at the beauty within that surrounds everything. Loved it, sending my hugs to cheer your day, Vienna.

    ChemicalEyes Avatar Shannon ChemicalEyes Date: 3/16/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Vienna, really means a lot. I've now started a blog for my ramblings, please check it out when you can? Thank you! http://yourdreamstheydrip.wordpress.com/