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Whisper To Me

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Below is the poem entitled Whisper To Me which was written by poet Melanie Hillmer. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Whisper To Me

        Whisper To Me

Whisper, Whisper To Me
Once again.
I hunger for your secure,
Tender, steady embrace.


Whisper, Whisper To Me
You're voice, is the strength,
I've always relied on.
To stand alone.


Whisper, Whisper To Me
My insecurities vanish
In just a wisp, of a hush
Within you're breath.

Whisper, Whisper To Me
Once again.



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  1. Date: 3/26/2012 8:00:00 AM
    Now I have doubts that my generation was more romantic. We had "Shout Shout Knock yourself out". Sweet write.

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 8:51:00 AM
    Lovely in its softness; we all need the tender strength of others to keep insecurities atway.

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/23/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the visit. I'll be sure to do the same.
  1. Date: 3/22/2012 4:49:00 PM
    Hello Melanie, A beautiful presentation this...Loves longing and feelings of its safe encounters...One special someone....Love this one. Thank you Melanie for visiting me. Please come again. Lov, Shar Keep it flowing honey....

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/23/2012 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the visit. I'll be sure to return the favor.
  1. Date: 3/20/2012 10:22:00 AM
    Nice light romantic write on this one Melanie. Whispers make insecurities vanish and how true that is. Thank you for reading my poem and welcome to the site. love phyl

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/23/2012 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again for another visit. You're the best! This one is a little out of "my comfort zone" type of poem. I haven't written "romance-like" poetry before. My dream poem to write, would to be able to write like thoes of the 18th & 19th century romantic poetry writers. "Goose Bumpy", If you know what I mean. LOL
  1. Date: 3/18/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Welcome to the site. Nice light write you have here. Just replace each "you're" with "your". What you have in both places is a contraction of "you are". Also, you missed typing the "t" key on your keyboard when you attempted to enter the word "strength" in the second line of your second verse. Still, this is a nice write.

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/19/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the visit. And more importantly ,Thank You for pointing out my errors in a very constructive, humane manner. Any critiques good or bad are very much appreciated.
  1. Date: 3/18/2012 2:59:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one today..I like the topic and presentation..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..You must have had a great relationship with your grandmother.Since my parents death, I never know when something will trigger a memory...Sara

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/19/2012 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/19/2012 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You for the visit. I am unable to invite you over for tea. How about we try and keep up on poetry exchanging instead? I don't think we ever really get over the loss of loved ones. I think of all the things my Grandma taught me. How to crouchet, make barbie clothes & of course, peanut butter cookies.-YUM- But the most important thing she ever taught me, was if you don't have something good to say about someone it's best you say nothing at all. She never even said thoes words She lived by them.
  1. Date: 3/18/2012 11:51:00 AM
    Melanie I like the short verse form, always says a lot, thanks for your comments and a big welcome to the soup, keep writing..David

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/19/2012 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for viewing my poem, and welcoming me here. I just posted an acrostic :HORSES: It is short versed, and an ejoyable challenge for me. Look forward to more poetry exchanging with you.
  1. Date: 3/16/2012 6:31:00 PM
    This is a sweet and lovely poem Melanie. - Thank you for visit my "Spring" poem, welcome back.Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/19/2012 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello again. Sorry for the delay. I've been thinking alot about spring lately. We just aquired another 6" of snow, in th last two days here. Youre poem is rather soothing. Thank You again for stopping by. Look forward to more poetry exchanging with you.
  1. Date: 3/16/2012 6:11:00 PM
    Nice to meet you new poet, welcome to Soup, your form can always be called Verse when you don't know ;) Light & Love

    Hillmer Avatar Melanie Hillmer
    Date: 3/19/2012 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You for the visit, and the advice. ALL is very much appreciated.