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Hugs That We Once Shared

Hugs that we once shared, lasted just a glimpse in time
If only I could read her mind, and imagine what I'd find

Would I find a woman of truth, or a woman of trust
Or a woman with a mind, whose mind has turned to rust

To drift into another's world, and promise them the earth
Hugs that we once shared, does it really make them worth

They only lasted a glimpse of time, happened they never should
If I could turn back time, your damn right I would


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  1. Date: 10/28/2012 7:23:00 PM

    Beautiful poem James. Lots of emotion here - I feel ya.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 8:24:00 PM

    there are two good reasons for turning back time. and you just named one of them.

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 12:29:00 PM

    Ah, the capricious woman seps lively in your poem James. If nothing else, she makes life interesting. Loved the feeling in this! Lizzy

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 11:22:00 AM

    This one made me think..I am wondering of whom he is speaking or if he is just writing?....Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 3:00:00 AM

    So much depth here,I can read your thought and feel the emotion, when our trust is shattered by those we love most.. We definitely want to change back time.. I do believe there's always a better tomorrow on hold my good friend-Charma

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 9:59:00 AM

    amazing deep feeling..pd

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 1:37:00 PM

    You will find love again James, this is a lovely written poem - alot of hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 12:06:00 PM

    beautifully written and touching piece James

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 11:00:00 AM

    wow, what a thought provoking scene, my king... deep reflections that sway with your lyrical words... amazing!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 10:57:00 AM

    love the ending in this one, James. hugs, Catie :)