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My Hopeless Words

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My Hopeless Words

My hopeless words were dressed in silver
Your silence was a hurtful gold
Always thought I knew you well
Never knew that you could be this cold

It was fate that brought you to me
But it was me that pushed you away
Never thought it'd end like this
So I'm still crying out for yesterday

How I want to make you blossom
Before we part our ways forever
Just for the one and only time
The way I did when we were stuck together

Temptresses surround you 
I'm scared that they'll lead you astray
When we're talking in my head
I beg you not to lose your way

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  1. Date: 4/1/2012 7:16:00 PM
    Sadness without any bitterness...my kind of poem :)keep it up

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 4:31:00 PM
    Wery sweet poem Roman,you have to fight for your love. - oxox Anne-Lise