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The castle of my dreams

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The castle of my dreams

The castle of my dreams has the purple windows.
Through this windows you can not see the widows,
only you can see are strange shadows
walking through the mirrors.

The thunder and an angel announce
a galactic storm with extremely changes
for all creatures in our false world.

The mining camp is empty, someone have taken all gold.
These are the same people who have stolen 
our freedom, our mind.

I know one thing about this life 
that the simple wishes never comes.
Only salvation is that you must escape from your mind
because the mind create wishes.

The castle of my dreams is defending us
from our screams, our fears.
The castle of my dreams is made 
by our diamond tears.

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  1. Date: 7/15/2012 5:37:00 PM
    very well done ,,,,, have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 9:10:00 AM
    The castle of my dreams is made by our diamond tears-A very profound verse to compliment this beautiful poem..lovely -Charma :)

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 1:45:00 AM
    simplicity is the hardest thing to achieve... beautiful poem from a thoughtful mind

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 9:50:00 PM
    A very interesting and imaginative poem. I really enjoyed this. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 12:26:00 PM
    my first time to read you, zeljko and i'm glad i did... wonderful visceral images and poetic insights.. lovely!.. a warm greeting to you for joining us..:) hugggs!

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    Date: 3/14/2012 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad that you like this poem...and thanx for warm greeting.
  1. Date: 3/14/2012 11:14:00 AM
    love this wonderful poem, such philosophy here, welcome to soup. harry

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    Date: 3/14/2012 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx for welcome harry!
  1. Date: 3/14/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Good morning ;-) zel, interesting poem , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"

    Sitar Avatar Željko Sitar
    Date: 3/14/2012 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx for reading my poem and I am very glad that you like this poem!
  1. Date: 3/14/2012 6:02:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Zeljko. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Sitar Avatar Željko Sitar
    Date: 3/14/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx for warm welcome and I send you love from Croatia!
  1. Date: 3/14/2012 4:13:00 AM
    Vivid images and nice use of language.

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    Date: 3/14/2012 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx Madeleine I appreciate that!!! :)))