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Thoughts

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Thoughts

It’s amazing to have many thoughts,
The worst is when you know they are simply thoughts that can be shattered,
A pile of thoughts was increasing that became a palace of dreams,
Within a blink and years of determination, it is all destroyed.
 
As if the world is a graveyard, so that old thoughts are buried and destroyed,
So that there is a birth of a new one with genuine perserverance,
One cannot complain nor blame,
Sometimes, some situations only show that it was only meant to be buried.
 
Some people are part of one’s life to only make sure that happiness comes in installment,
And they deserve the credit to everything,
Thoughts, Oh Thoughts, bring me a day where I am glad I have none left because it is hard,
It is hard and seeing every breath slipping away without leaving any motivational belief.
 
Then I turn to be different and knowing I will come through this and move on,
Thoughts are meant to be filtered,
And some thoughts are meant to be buried in the graveyard of false hope,
So that one can learn how to smile again embracing a new ambience.

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:47:00 PM
    B K., .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:35:00 PM
    BHAVNA,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

    khemlani Avatar Bhavna khemlani
    Date: 11/25/2012 1:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I appreciate that you appreciate my participation and presence in Poetry Soup. Wishing you a happy and Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day, too. Bhavna :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Beautifully written piece. I have enjoyed your poetry very much. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:17:00 AM
    Beautiful Bhavna, if we load our heads and minds with thoughts of our of our past, presence and future.I agreed with you that some thoughts are meant to be buried and move on in life. I think I love 'thoughts are meant to be filtered. I wish you the best. nice one.

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 12:29:00 PM
    I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry today. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Bhavna. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 7:14:00 AM
    Good morning ;-) bhavna., interesting thoughts you have put down , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"