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The Road

I walk on a road It's cold, It's damp just alone walking the road The only thing I can hear is the wind The wind is telling me to go on, The snow starts to fall, hitting me on my face I wish for warmth but there is no such place what can I do?? Where should I go?? Thinking just makes me weak I must reach my greatest peak I've reached the end of the road and what do I find?? I find a wall with the words go behind I look behind this wall and close my eyes It's to bright, oh so bright I come to find I've reached my Paradise

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  1. Date: 3/27/2012 12:59:00 AM

    I like this poem. your words paint the picture so well. Good write- JH

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 1:20:00 PM

    I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Marina. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 2:59:00 PM

    This was a well written poem, like it alot Marina. - oxox love Anne-Lise