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'neath the willow

~ A poet's verse swept away by the gale, sighted years past upon a mead, on a treasure trove trail... 'neath the marquee of the willow he lay; Spray crystals of gold with crimson petals Of her cold lips, brushing the heat of his skin; Her white gossamer gown curtains his eyes in a flimsy claim. Sunlight and undulating shadows dancing on his pale frame. As she's shielded in his yearning embrace, His heart aflame with ardor against his breast. Lines of her soft ivory his fingers traced, The winnowed wisps of a cloud, they shivered. Rank emotions within him quivered, Drooping his head, crown of dark curls against her lily bosom; He removed the wreath of white roses from her hair. Scattering scarlet on the velvet green, He fanned them out wide; and the languid afternoon air sighed. The waves upon the river, they rose and swell; Then fell into a silent gleam. Fingers furled around each crease; Lacy patterns drawn of her ruffled hem upon the breeze. .. For Linda-Marie's contest : "Treasure Trove" written by gautami phookan

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  1. Date: 3/19/2012 1:49:00 AM

    Oh wowee, I sure missed reading this sensual gem from before--this sure is a beauty, gautami! I really enjoyed how you made this so romantic and beautifully rendered-- I felt like that breeze sighing, heehee :D -- I see this won, so congrats to you! Hugs to you!!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 4:56:00 PM

    This is lovely, my friend

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Very Sensual, lovley congratulations gautami

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 12:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:18:00 PM

    Wow, Gautami, this one blows me away for its sensual imagery. Big congratulations to you. A FAVE

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:54:00 PM

    Very pretty, Guatami. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 9:59:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, gautami. Awesome. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 4:04:00 AM

    Send you a congrats for your win. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:06:00 AM

    congrads to you Gautami!

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 8:54:00 PM

    congrats Gautami on sweet success for this marvelous entry luv.. thankxx for supporting ..

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 1:20:00 PM

    Hi Linda, just wait I'm editing some lines.. they should be no more than 12, you've said...