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The Last Laugh

I once listened to your words of sweet reasoning Only to receive a life of silent threatening I questioned my doubt and found my heart mourning I blame not you for this life of mine drowning

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  1. Date: 3/12/2012 10:33:00 AM

    The "I don't Knows" hold the most feeling Sarah. Thanks for yours. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 8:52:00 PM

    interesting how you relate it to the title. love that last part...mine drowning. enjoy reading your poem today

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 5:40:00 PM

    well, i sure hope the last laugh was yours, sweetie. This was an interesting little poem. You should check out the section here called Forms. Look up forms such as Kimo. I bet this poem could be made to fit that form.

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 5:33:00 PM

    Nice write Sarah, enjoyed your poetry tonight, and thank you for all your kind comments on my poems, hugs,vieo