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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 5:59:00 AM
    lol Quite a story here and quite a bit of fun. I much enjoyed the read. May a smile land on your face and refuse to leave. TLee

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 10:30:00 AM
    Many many congratulations on your well deserved win,David

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 3:23:00 PM
    haha a big congrats to you for such a quirky one, and for raising a smile :-)

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Congrats my friend on your win!!! Just so you know Arild and I have been glued to our Tv's in hopes to see you on the news running down the streets with that green hair!!! lol just having fun my friend.. hope your well Michael

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 6:53:00 PM
    Wonderful write,David.Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 5:11:00 PM
    YOu know, I like this one even BETTER upon second read. BIG congrats. Very well deserved win.

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 2:47:00 PM
    you rocked this with a twist, david... congrats on your win in my contest!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 12:29:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with humorous dance poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 12:06:00 PM
    congrats David on a fabulous win for this hip hop dance luv.. cool and creative one..

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 8:31:00 AM
    David, this is funny--David, perhaps she thought you were going to kill her! LOL

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 12:09:00 AM
    Best wishes David with this death defying dance poem; hope it hops to the top..

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 10:25:00 AM
    i love the way you dance in a poem-lovely :)

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 4:32:00 AM
    gawddd, david.. won;t read much as i will reserve this come judging time... nice one and thanks for joining!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 11:51:00 AM
    good luck with this David, excellent poem, reading what you write, is always an interesting experience and enjoyable. read your blog, regards time for soup, i;m in the same boat, i'll be away for 2 to 3 month by the middle of the year, understand what you are saying, good luck. harry

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 9:19:00 AM
    ha ha! so funny :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 10:07:00 PM
    DAVID,, HA ~great verse... thank you for your awesome poem ;-) have yourself a good night~ Always*PD

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 5:46:00 PM
    very cute funny one, DAvid. I love the lightness of this one. Wonderful title, imagining you hip hopping like a bunny. haha

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 4:44:00 PM
    hehehe you funny man dear oh dear hey:)

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 12:42:00 PM
    wild and witty and wonderful write David.. what imagery luv.. Nette will get a great laugh and read on this entry ..good luck..