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IF THERE IS NO GOD

IF THERE IS NO GOD,

How could we be suspended in space?
Just spinning in place.
Who could've made an ozone layer?
For the occupants grounded by gravity, and breathing of air.
Life exist on land, air, sea, and the dirt,
Proof of the blueprint of a genius at work.
We image something, to have dominion over the earth,
Particules of its intelligence watching it work.
Placed at a precise position from the sun,
Similarities of 8 planets incorporated into one.
If there is no God, I want to be the fool that believed,
Than the fool in doubt when we leave!

          Scribe M.L.

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  1. Date: 7/20/2014 7:11:00 PM
    Brilliant, what a great write, was reading some of Richards and saw you there, and decided to jump here and have a read, glad I did!

  1. Date: 7/18/2014 4:21:00 PM
    You have got that one right..Great work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 6/12/2014 10:44:00 PM
    Loved it!

  1. Date: 5/26/2014 9:25:00 AM
    ooo What a poem Scribe, this is worth read twice..awesome write

  1. Date: 5/18/2014 7:38:00 AM
    Hi Mar! I enjoyed reading this upbeat rhyme through a few times! No one can debate what is undebatable, right? We are made in his image and we are designs as a reflection of his own true heart. Science and faith DO MIX and you have done it so well! :)

  1. Date: 5/18/2014 7:37:00 AM
    Hi Mar! I enjoyed reading this upbeat rhyme through a few times! No one can debate what is undebatable, right? We are made in his image and we are designs as a reflection of his own true heart. Science and faith DO MIX and you have done it so well! :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2014 11:13:00 PM
    Hola Marlon; Beautiful Poem , I want to believe that there is a God always. Right now as I am very Ill. I want to believe that he exists. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 9:13:00 PM
    Ahhhhh great work indeed!

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 1:12:00 AM
    Yes this is a master piece. Great art work indeed I'm sorry for not commenting sooner

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 9:13:00 AM
    What a beauty and truth you have sketched in this lovely Poem like the beauty of a blooming flower my friend. It's a Gem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 3:10:00 AM
    Very artfully written I enjoyed it and thank you for reading my poem entitled GOD

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Dear Scribe, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. After reading YOUR First POEM on the SOUP I offer my warm belated Welcome to POETRYSOUP. I also send my belated Congratulations on YOUR POEM "IF THERE IS NO GOD" being a well deserved Feature. A very well thought out write.Your POETIC Artistry intriguing.One of YOUR replys "GOD never said he was Jew, Christian or Muslim" but He chose the Isralites (Jews) and through Ruth the Gentiles (Christians) Theologically Valid

    Esquire Avatar HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 3/25/2013 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will be back to read more of YOUR Captivating POETRY With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 1:53:00 PM
    God bless you! Great job! Thank you for sharing this... we continue to pray that more people will come to believe, Marlon. Always Annalise

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:17:00 PM
    LOL such cheek! Have you done your good deed for the day? You really gave those non-believers something to think on! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:50:00 AM
    just taking in your first here on soup, this is a awesome poem, yes like the universe, your poem, so creative...

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 3:07:00 PM
    I don't see your Monopoly poem?

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 2:02:00 PM
    i just had to read this again. Its my fav. Stay blessed *smiles* ron.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 4:45:00 PM
    Awesome writing here Scribe.. I really enjoyed it!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:11:00 AM
    again another controversal issue i was brought up catholic not through chocie with strict morals but over the years due to persal events deaths in family etc indoubt what one tells you is like someone told them so on and so fourth maybe every mans his own god i dont know much about planits maybe just chance we got here why cant we make our own rules make it up as we go along to deep subject nice written nice selection of words good insight david scott

    WRITER Avatar NOVICE WRITER
    Date: 6/1/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 4:32:00 PM
    Hello when i first laid eyes on this piece i thought oh no religion but i do have to say your write is intelligent thoughtful and reasonable as well as beautifully put, no solid im absolute in my thoughts .. more a ...if.../ I so, so wish i could believe, you have no idea and just purely by your piece i am a tad swayed... thank you.. karen

    WRITER Avatar NOVICE WRITER
    Date: 5/31/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It has to be. No apes has transformed that we account for. Too many details, something genius took place! Thanks..
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