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IF THERE IS NO GOD

IF THERE IS NO GOD,

How could we be suspended in space?
Just spinning in place.

Who could've made an ozone layer?
For the occupants grounded by gravity, and breathing of air.

Life exist on land, air, sea, and the dirt,
Proof of the blueprint of a genius at work.

We image something, to have dominion over the earth,
Particules of it's intelligence, watching it work.

Placed at a precise position from the sun,
Similarities of 8 planets incorporated into one.

If there is no God, I want to be the fool that believed,
Than the fool in doubt, when we leave!

           Written By,
                          MARLON LINTON

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:07:00 PM

    Dear Scribe, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. After reading YOUR First POEM on the SOUP I offer my warm belated Welcome to POETRYSOUP. I also send my belated Congratulations on YOUR POEM "IF THERE IS NO GOD" being a well deserved Feature. A very well thought out write.Your POETIC Artistry intriguing.One of YOUR replys "GOD never said he was Jew, Christian or Muslim" but He chose the Isralites (Jews) and through Ruth the Gentiles (Christians) Theologically Valid

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    I will be back to read more of YOUR Captivating POETRY With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 7:41:00 PM

    Scribe, wow.. your first poem,, has been the best reading of today... and guess what some how i feel as If i have read this poem today.. I agree with you.. HOW how??? and I will be that fool too.... I will read this poem one more time.. adding this poem, to my favorite list,, in which i visit all favorite poems once or twice a year.. so hopefully you do not mind my returns... always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 7:41:00 PM

    love the avatar... pd

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 1:53:00 PM

    God bless you! Great job! Thank you for sharing this... we continue to pray that more people will come to believe, Marlon. Always Annalise

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:17:00 PM

    LOL such cheek! Have you done your good deed for the day? You really gave those non-believers something to think on! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:50:00 AM

    just taking in your first here on soup, this is a awesome poem, yes like the universe, your poem, so creative...

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 3:07:00 PM

    I don't see your Monopoly poem?

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 2:02:00 PM

    i just had to read this again. Its my fav. Stay blessed *smiles* ron.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 4:45:00 PM

    Awesome writing here Scribe.. I really enjoyed it!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:11:00 AM

    again another controversal issue i was brought up catholic not through chocie with strict morals but over the years due to persal events deaths in family etc indoubt what one tells you is like someone told them so on and so fourth maybe every mans his own god i dont know much about planits maybe just chance we got here why cant we make our own rules make it up as we go along to deep subject nice written nice selection of words good insight david scott

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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 4:32:00 PM

    Hello when i first laid eyes on this piece i thought oh no religion but i do have to say your write is intelligent thoughtful and reasonable as well as beautifully put, no solid im absolute in my thoughts .. more a ...if.../ I so, so wish i could believe, you have no idea and just purely by your piece i am a tad swayed... thank you.. karen

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    It has to be. No apes has transformed that we account for. Too many details, something genius took place! Thanks..
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 12:22:00 AM

    The Scribe, I like this. I know I'm a fool! Great job!

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:51:00 PM

    GLORY! As the scripture would say "The fool says in his heart that there is no God", amen great scribe..:)

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:07:00 PM

    Marlon, this is So true. I think only an idiot cannot see the beauty and divine nature of things. I wrote a sonnet on this exact same topic. I think it was called Sonnet to the Doubters. VERY good. I am glad I came back to the first poem at bottom of your page.

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  1. Date: 5/19/2012 7:19:00 PM

    I like this poem!

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:43:00 PM

    :PP Oh yeah, you are totally right. there IS a God, scientists and other people! :) Just wonderful ! - DWB FORGOT TO RATE U A 7!

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:42:00 PM

    :PP Oh yeah, you are totally right. there IS a God, scientists and other people! :) Just wonderful ! - DWB

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:05:00 AM

    This is good. One of the big questions.Life is full of mysteries, that's what makes it so interesting Thank you for sympathizing with my plight. Jean

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 3:58:00 PM

    Great poem and I like the "fool" and I also want to be fooled! No one but God could do this! He is with you.

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    God never stated he was Christian, Jew, or Muslim, etc.
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 10:45:00 PM

    I love it!!!!

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  1. Date: 5/11/2012 1:20:00 PM

    All praises to God who resides in U!

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  1. Date: 4/12/2012 10:31:00 PM

    Right on! I dig the science.

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  1. Date: 4/10/2012 11:04:00 PM

    THIS Awesome Write is somewhat a Validation. A good one. Great Poetry is also proof of GOD. As are you!

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  1. Date: 4/6/2012 12:54:00 PM

    God is the guy proving who you are.

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  1. Date: 4/2/2012 8:16:00 PM

    WuRd ...that's what I'm screamin yo!------My Captcha Preview thing here now says"NXXN"----I think that's a sign that NIXON DID IT! ~HA

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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Marloooon....this is truly amazing...congrats being featured!

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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 10:41:00 AM

    I have never read a poem that makes more sense, i love it. -Clinton-

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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 2:40:00 PM

    So true! But yet so few willing to accept who is GOD is .. A solider for Christ Jesus Patricia Lewis

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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 6:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Marlon. Love,Carol

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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 1:34:00 AM

    CONGRATS FOR THE FEATURE MAN THIS IS ONE OF MY FAV OF YOUR POEMS. ITS VERY MOVING.

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