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Naked Under A Tropical Moon

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Naked Under A Tropical Moon

Where the ocean meets the skyline
A beauty sight as the giant sun sets
Its the soothing effect...
We`ve been shipped away from the everyday pain

Where the end of the world meets the skyline
A place of magic and mystery
Don`t know why it is..but I really don`t wanna ask
Gives me the perfect guidance,away from any struggles

It is a masterpiece of the univers`own grace
The wonderful feeling of a day with no regrets
As the tropical moon climbs over the edge of the world
We are laying naked on a powder sand beach

Carried away by a tropical fullmoon
And into a world of intense intimate desires
You let my fingers explore you...your body,my temple
Magnetized under a tropical moon,we have found our love nest


A.Ertsland
March 9th 2012

Its not for the "Tropical Moon" contest.But it gave me the inspiration to this write:-)
Just couldn`t find the words for a rhyme.Cheers soupers..Hugs,Arild

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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 5:08:00 PM
    soup..mail... pd

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 11:42:00 PM
    hi...I left you a comment on your last blog... i will remove,, the unneedddedddd kindness.. I could not help myself on the bluntness..always..pd

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 6:46:00 PM
    (*_#) You Lucky Son Of A Gun My Dear Precious Arild = I Love This Picturesque In Beauties Poem Of Both Love & Creation == Within My Minds Eye; If You Do Not Mind Myself Saying So; She Looks Sooo Beautiful (#_*) Wow === Love Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:41:00 PM
    Mezmerizing words that carry me into space to feel the magic of a night filled with love. Great Arild, you ol' romantic! :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 9:28:00 PM
    well, whatever it's for, it works for me. love how you open it with something everyone can relate and then close it with a special touch. thanks for stopping by and your kind comments

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Hey Arild, I enjoyed this one loads! Love the ending, so much to indulge in lol .. Am sending you a quick soupmail ;) love & hugs Wilma

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 8:16:00 AM
    All this and a bottle of the finest French wine, eh. Very tender, sensitive, loving write, Arild. Enjoyed. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 3:50:00 AM
    Thanks Arild for your compliment. love the image this conjurs in my head. xx

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 8:12:00 PM
    Such beauty expressed it sounds like a truly magical beach, enjoy the waves enjoy the moon Arild, love, vie

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 6:55:00 PM
    Very nice one! Keep up the excellent work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 5:18:00 PM
    Loved this Arild , a very enjoyable read my friend , Declan ....

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 3:48:00 PM
    well, it does not get much better than this for a poem about the topics and the moon. VERY well done, my norwegian friend!!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 2:56:00 PM
    Arild, so hey! Where in the world is your Dodge Dart car poem??....What gives?...ha ha..git 'er done, Ertsland! You could incorporate your car into this wondrous tropical moon! ha ha..A dynamite tropical poem ---What a love nest!! :)

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 3/9/2012 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ..hahaha!! There will be no Dodge Dart`s in that paradise:)) That ol`Dart would kick like a dynamite fart..haha:-)
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 2:24:00 PM
    gawwd, arild... another of your woven words so perfectly laced together in romantic form.. now, i'm drooling!... best of luck and huggs!..:)