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Elm 2

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Elm 2

branches unfurl a silent cry to sky distressed rustling of drained leaves sapped by a dark disease

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  1. Date: 3/15/2012 3:34:00 PM
    this is a beautiful memorial to an elm - it's sad to see their demise. Great piece!

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 9:50:00 AM
    A belated congrats with this kind of sad piece. I love it. BG

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:21:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 11:45:00 AM
    Congrats Charlotte on your win.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 5:28:00 AM
    Congratulations for your placement in this contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 9:40:00 PM
    Nicely done, Charlotte! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 7:39:00 PM
    Congrats. Charlotte on your kimo win, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 5:51:00 PM
    I live on Elm St. and we lost all our Elm's to that disease the new resistant trees are very unpleasing to look at..Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 5:02:00 PM
    congrats Charlotte, wonderful entry, deserved winner. harry

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 12:25:00 PM
    Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like a winning entry in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 12:19:00 AM
    Are you describing Dutch Elm disease here? This is a very descriptive kimo. For just three lines and twenty-three syllables, you've managed to say a lot here.

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 4:03:00 PM
    FAVE. I think it's also best poem I saw today

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 4:02:00 PM
    oh MY, this is exquisite in its portrayal of sadness. I LOVE It. one of the best I've seen.

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 8:54:00 AM
    a sad one. excellent imagery. Enjoyed your poem this morning. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 8:14:00 AM
    You have painted a picture of a sad but honorable passing. Beautiful...