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truth

you held me close, to smell my fear
i froze in time, when you came near
lips on lips, you taste the bitterness
truth be told, you need forgiveness

i speak my heart, you remember lies
my soul cried out under midnight skies
the pain would leave, as it always would
my scars remained but i hid as best i could

its hard to speak with a mouth sewn shut
i want to heal from the deepest cut
scared to breathe my heartbeats loud
i felt alone in the biggest crowd

my tunnel vision started to cure
the vision of life is a powerful lure
so i said goodbye to the darken night
and crawled my way back to the beacon of light.


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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:20:00 AM
    Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 3:20:00 PM
    good poem congrats on feature Shadow x smiles

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    Date: 7/10/2013 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow xoxo
  1. Date: 7/10/2013 9:15:00 AM
    The truth hurts, but it certainly absolves & removes all stresses from within. Excellent & raw piece!

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 6:17:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Vanessa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 5:20:00 AM
    Very descriptive and insightful write Vanessa.The truth might be a heavy task,but you say it with great wisdom in this ballad.There`s a soul in the words here..Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Vanessa this is beautiful; that beacon isn't always easy to see. Very nice

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 11:11:00 AM
    Very nicely said- would be a good source of a song lyric,"So i said goodbye to the darken night." I love the first stanza too.