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Red Mazda 323

It was a red Mazda 323,

with 4 on the floor, not 3 on the tree.

It was my first time to go,

and I wrecked it in the snow,

So, the ex-wife made fun of me.



For the "first car" contest

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  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:48:00 PM

    This limerick is SCHWEET. Big Congrats.

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/15/2012 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You!!
  1. Date: 3/13/2012 3:47:00 PM

    Very cute Christopher. However it's heartbreaking to lose something you treasure like that. You never forget your first love or your first car, and for a guy, the car is probably his first love. (smile) God Bless and thanks so much for your kind words about my first car. It's a true story. JB

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/13/2012 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 3/13/2012 2:13:00 PM

    Congratulations Chris, well done xx

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/13/2012 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 3/13/2012 1:11:00 PM

    congrats Christopher on a grand win for this exciting entry on first car luv..

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/13/2012 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 3/13/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Christopher, congratulations on your win in Carol Brown's contest today. Hugs, Gail

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/13/2012 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 3/13/2012 7:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Christopher. Love, Carol

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/13/2012 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:37:00 AM

    Reads as fast as the car actually goes!! ha ha. This limerick is light and fun...delightful. Good luck in the contest, Christopher! Gwendolen

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/13/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!