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A Story to Tell

A heart read and quoted by many in this lifetime Battle scars that remain and yet shielded by a peace of mind Walked several miles and traveled while teaching others how to embrace Remains courageous, faithful and strong with persistence in any given case Blindsided by those who are willing to love and cherish her to the end Silence becomes her guard, her armor, her protector, and best friend Tears of pain, and sorrow, all of which are from a past memory Times shared, lost and gained, the negative days are history Mental pictures are drawn from imaginations that lead her to an untraceable place Recruit no one, for life has taught her that there is no room for more mistakes A mind reader that has established herself to be two steps ahead Portrays an interesting novel, a world kept secret unread Admire her dearly for her patience, wisdom and knowledge untold How does she continue to live life so freely far from her empty soul?
Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:01:00 AM

    Wow, you held my attention "A heart" even to after "Empty soul..." Very mesmerizing. [:

    C  Avatar Angel C Date: 5/20/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    from "A heart" ***
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 6:46:00 PM

    wow..... Beautiful....... I felt sorry for the girl in your poem but, oddly enough, I related. Thanks for writing such touching pieces. I am sure glad I viewed them now. Katei

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:43:00 PM

    I just read over a few...burners indeed! Thanks for stopping by fam. Looking forward to your new piece; you do have a story to tell. FLAME ON!!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 11:45:00 AM

    A wordsmith you are my friend, beautifully done...D

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 3:46:00 PM

    A story well told seen by the eyes of a poet. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 3:09:00 PM

    I love the way you use your words to paint a picture. You are a talented artist.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:32:00 AM

    You have weaved all the words beautifully... :) loved it!

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:43:00 AM

    i just love this poem,though I am reading it late.Love the way u have put the words.have a great weekend :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:55:00 AM

    Powerful poem, Pace, such faith and sincerity blending together here.....glad i came back to your first poem posted here.....

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 5:06:00 PM

    Love the concept of a mind reader two steps ahead.

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 7:58:00 AM

    G Pace, ooo I like this.. Living life away from the soul comes easy to some.. nuf siad... xox~PD

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/18/2012 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD!! :)
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:23:00 AM

    This is really one good story to tell,P!!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/19/2012 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sweetheart!!
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 2:26:00 PM

    Pace, Wonderful work here ,every line is great. You my friend are a visionary .Last line sums it up so well.Anne

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow!! Thank you for sharing with me!! A pleasure indeed to see your presence! Love the comment..hugs
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:10:00 PM

    Pace this would fit a lot of women over 40 and you tell this story well. It is unusual to find a man who can see behind the vail. A job well done. Huggs TLee

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/3/2012 10:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much TLee!!! A pleasure to have you stop by and share with me..huggs
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:37:00 PM

    I really enjoy reading your poems!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/1/2012 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Brittany!!
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 8:40:00 PM

    She's someone I know:) I enjoyed reading this

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/20/2012 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Knew you would like it!!
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 4:04:00 PM

    This is absolutely amazing... Greatly enjoyed reading it!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/20/2012 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!!
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:46:00 AM

    WOW.........STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/4/2012 4:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sir!!! Really appreciate you stopping by and checking out my work.
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:55:00 PM

    congrats on featured poem this week on PS luv.. excellent one to share...

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!!
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 5:28:00 PM

    Beautiful, I can relate! I enjoy all of your poetry and God bless you!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoy my work of art.
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:30:00 PM

    Congratulations on our poetry being featured this week G. Love, Carol

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 4/8/2012 9:51:00 PM

    Congrats for your weekly....oh oh I smell a wryder!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/8/2012 10:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a million!!!!
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 8:25:00 AM

    excellent meter n' flow there Pace...This is original, well defined sustainable art, while many others use pictures drawn by others, stack paper and trace!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you alot Mr. ROBOTO
  1. Date: 3/21/2012 10:22:00 AM

    Welcome to poetry soup site.. A story i enjoyed reading ,very profound-Charma

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for sharing your kind words!!
  1. Date: 3/10/2012 9:41:00 AM

    I WANT MORE, THIS IS GOOD.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    More you will get!!
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 1:59:00 PM

    I Love your soul, I'll keep watching for more of your works. Keep your soul open you're brilliant.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Enjoy to read your poem,you are brilliant. Thank you for sharing it. - oxox Anne-Lise

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you luv!!
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 7:30:00 AM

    I cannot tell you what an impact your poem had on my life in a positive way. It was as if, you wrote of my life, common threads we all can relate to, yet this unique work of (what I would call) prose poetry, is outstanding, it caused discussions not only in church: and an empty soul, the pastor reminded me of how David poured out his soul to the lord, with moaning, groaning and grumblings so as to be refreshed. THANK YOU so much, may God keep your pen steady,

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!! So beautiful!! My heart dropped!!!
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 7:30:00 AM

    with love, Lucinda Lu Cayton (poetess that left the site only to come back for one remark.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs and Kisses!!!
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 6:19:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you G. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the warm welcome!!
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