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A Successful Plight

Inside, he felt the time was right.
He told himself, tonight's the night!
The ring was in a box of white.
Despite feeling anxious, and a little tight,
he proposed to her, in the candlelight.
She answered - yes, to his delight,
which ended his successful plight!

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  1. Date: 3/12/2012 7:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Ralph. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 5:44:00 AM

    Beautiful proposal and write. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 5:27:00 PM

    This is so romantic, Ralph. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 1:29:00 PM

    I'm so glad she said yes! Congratulations on your win, Ralph.

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Beautiful poem by you Ralph.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 11:02:00 AM

    Very well done Ralph. Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 2:38:00 AM

    we written Ralph, loving poetry here....

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 10:05:00 PM

    lovely entry, congrats on your win Ralph

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Congrats. Ralph on your romantic write, great poem, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 7:20:00 PM

    You got my heart beating nervously with this one!! Good job, Ralph!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 6:17:00 PM

    congrats Ralph on an exciting win for this precious and romantic write on candlelight.. a lovely scene painted my friend.. happy weekend...

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 12:43:00 PM

    She answered:YES!!!! A happy day!!!! Well done Ralph. - oxox love Anne-Lise