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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 8:14:00 AM

    This is a very beautiful poem I enjoy reading tonight, Nathan! It's also like a song. I love it. Congratulations for this great write of yours! Thank you so much for sharing and my placement in your Haiku contest. I am deeply grateful and honored. Have a nice and grace-filled day to you and your family always! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:55:00 AM

    Great Writing here! You've captured the spirit of a young boyso well. love the 3rd stanza!

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 5:50:00 AM

    A profound write, Nathan...lots of imagery happening here! I'm not sure which couplet I find the most outstanding, they are all unique and cry out their own thought. Well, I'll come back to this and find even more I've missed, though I did read it at least three times over! Nathan, you nailed it with my write, it IS about seaweed..LOL So, I hear the evil genius Plankton was up to his old tricks again?! Spongebob has got to be the most clever animation!:) Best wishes!!! Mikki

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 6:01:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this Nathan, you put a lot of thought into it and it turned out to be a gem! Love the last two lines of each stanza

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 9:13:00 PM

    hey, one of yours I missed here. THis is really nice, Nathan. ME LIKES

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 7:14:00 PM

    very dreamy Nathan... beautiful rhymes and lines, specially the third stanza. something about hope and despair, mingle together become a unique flavor

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 12:42:00 PM

    So you started this poem a while back. Put it into your pile of unfinished poems. Love can be all things from drowning in the undertow or floating on endless clouds of heaven. Depends where life is leading you at the moment. Wonderful poem Nathan. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:36:00 AM

    Very well done this poem Nathan.Thank you for visit my poem today. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 6:40:00 PM

    HI! My love, my cutie pie, ((PAIN PAIN IS GOOD!)) Can you feel my pain, can you see this infection underneath my eye's. I know you started this poem 3 stupid years ago. I feel that undertow, you know the one I inspired while you where drowning. You want my opinion, the heck with every one's joy. Let's just stick together, and watch it all fall apart, Nothing is forever. I can't go on pretending I'm part of that joy. ~by the way you need to stop looking. Stop paying attention. always..PD

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Excellent piece friend. Nice work today. Michael