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Needle In The Hay

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Needle In The Hay

Jack and Jill were in the barn one day,

when Jack spoke of a game to play.

But, when the door was shut,

something poked Jill in the butt.

It seems she found a needle in the hay.



For the "Needle in the hay" contest


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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:35:00 PM

    CHRISTOPHER, Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 9:31:00 PM

    Ouch! She must have a holy bum, enjoyed your verse Chris, congrats. Vie

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 5:00:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..That Jack and Jill are always into something...Sara

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Christopher congrats on your win..David

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 6/1/2012 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Christopher. Love, Carol

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 6/1/2012 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 3/7/2012 6:59:00 PM

    Lol good one my friend.

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/7/2012 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 3/7/2012 5:17:00 PM

    Good one, Christopher. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/7/2012 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 3/7/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Ouch! That must have hurt, good one for the contest, love,vie

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/7/2012 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 3/7/2012 5:05:00 PM

    This is cute Christopher. I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes to you in the Needle in the hay contest. Hugs, Gail

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 3/7/2012 7:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!