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SUBLIME

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Below is the poem entitled SUBLIME which was written by poet JSLambert Mister ROBOTO. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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SUBLIME

Sublime
I've been shedding snakeskin...
so blind
I've been destroying the noise
my worst enemy

Deconstructing my identity 
soaking shoulder deep
in oceans of humility 
feasting upon fruits of tranquility

breaking shackles  
freeing ankles
from bloody mud puddles 
razor blade anxiety

rising to a  place 
where yesterday 
flees irrelevant 
tomorrow
is insufficient 

Yet
this moment 
of SUBLIMITY
right now...
forever remains
a fearless paradise

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  1. Date: 8/4/2014 12:59:00 AM
    I think this is my favorite so far. I love it.

    Mister ROBOTO Avatar JSLambert Mister ROBOTO
    Date: 8/4/2014 2:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    JaYSmOOve, That means the world coming from a TRUE BONIFIDE Poetess like Y.O.U.~
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 10:45:00 PM
    I had to read this more then once. You're incredible!

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:36:00 AM
    This is sick (:

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 3:55:00 PM
    superb approach on contrast, JS... to find the sublime in moments anger, fear or confusion is begging for for light... a powerful offering!!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 6:59:00 PM
    Very well written Lambert! You got some talent bro!

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Great flow and very interesting images. I like how you get sublime even from bloody mud puddles. But it's from the being freed of them!!! I really enjoyed this one and the feeling it gives ya! I love that fearless paradise. (I don't even understand about "notebooks" online. haha. I'm a computer moron.) Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 1:20:00 PM
    I'm proud to have read your awesome write here! The fourth stanza, oh my goodness, it is fantastic Joey! "where yesterday, flees irrelevant, tomorrow, is insufficient" I can relate to that line a lot! But I manage to cope in hope of better days ahead! And yet they do come, sporadic at times, but they do come! I love your poem that you have written here my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Dear Joey, first, I'm so glad your March Madness poem has placed first in other contests. It was awesome, just as this one is. We often don't realize we are our own worst enemies and it takes courage to make the changes needed to live a happier life. The moment of "sublimity" you describe is the pinacle of success! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 4:47:00 AM
    Love it J..It smacks of humility and truth xx Hugs