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Hierarchy

Violence under anarchy
Anarchy under my screams
Screams under a mental breakdown
Breakdown under chronic daydreams
Dreams under an uprising
Uprising under retribution
Retribution under pain
Pain under God
God under Me.

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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 1:35:00 AM

    Kyle very cleverly done, I like it..David

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 11:23:00 PM

    Nice one. The last two words are really strong. Love how you structured this one. Always, Laura