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Untitled thoughts

Charmaine Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Untitled thoughts

I'll be watching over you even when I'm gone my eyes will always find you in forevermore Somehow I will protect you a star wish far away a long gone living shadow in each new yesterday a petal on a rock a dew behind the wall emotion on a tree trunk a cascading stream at Fall a million broken pieces a fainting smile as whole a tickling little feeling my hand upon your soul Still there,though I'm not with you in every waking thought Still here?though you're not with me in moon's soft whisper caught a journey on short lifelines two roads, a seperate path dry ink upon worn chapters last dream beats heart to heart.
' The Missing ' Inspired by Andrea's poem

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 6:39:00 AM
    AGAIN ANOTHER COOL PEACE WITH EMOTION SOUP ME LOVE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT YOU AND YOUR WORK XXX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 8:15:00 PM
    wow! full in depth and beauty, one of the most lovely flowing piece i've read so far.

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 6:34:00 PM
    sweetly written softly told expressively emoted .. ,issing someone special.. as we all do luv .. we press forward because we MUST.. Andrea is forever an inspiration here on PS.. as are u Charma dear..friend..

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are an inspiration too linda,usually of romance,friendship and love... thanks for reading and how are you?
  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:39:00 AM
    Hey Charma, this is so beautiful...Hope you're doing good...Marty

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm doing fine dear,my good wishes go to you too ,and thanks for reading my poetry
  1. Date: 3/6/2012 10:19:00 AM
    awesome poem, harry

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks harry horsman :)
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 11:05:00 PM
    oh my goodness, when I started reading this, it kind of made me think of my poem I had just written, and then lo and behold, you said my poem inspired it at the bottom here. WOW!! I especially loved the line "my hand upon your soul!" Gotta fave this one!! and I'm glad I saw this tonight.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    AWWWWWWWWWW..Thanks for the favourite Andrea..Yes,your words are very inspiring many times,and so was 'Missing',thanks for reading dear-Charma
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 7:38:00 PM
    beautifully done

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mr Situation :)
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    Date: 3/5/2012 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Smile ˜ Come Here * A Little Bit Closer * Closer * Can You Hear That * Whispering To You * Read My Mind, Baby!:) ˜
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 3:23:00 PM
    This is beautiful written Carmaine, just beautiful. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    AWWW...Thanks dear friend :)
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:39:00 PM
    Dear Charma, this is such a beautiful poem. We all need someone to watch over us and I can feel your "hand upon my soul" as I read this. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love you, Carolyn

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes my hand has many fingers like Jim Carey's hand,its long...and it reaches all good friends including you-Hugs :)
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Beautiful piece Charmaine and a delight to read on this Monday evening :) xx

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mr Scot man for reading my poetry,I visit yours soon... Charma
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:14:00 PM
    This is a stunning interpretation for the theme Charma! Wishing you the best for the contest with this bittersweet gem ;) *hugs* Wilma

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wilma i don't do contests,but thanks for supporting this poem of mine sweet lady-Charma
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 11:51:00 AM
    This poem simply sings to me, in a sad yet familiar way. Very well written.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you can hear the song Danny :)-Thanks for supporting my poetry-Charma
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Look at my eyes! : ( It's marvelous...Outstanding... Such an emotive write, dear Charmaine! One of your best works! Into my Favs.!! "Somehow I will protect you/a star wish far away/a long gone living shadow/in each new yesterday" !! So sad! ...but beautiful! Bring another one! : ) Ruben.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :( I see brown :)thanks for adding it to your favourites Ruben.I'm happy when someone adds my poetry to favs,especially when that someone is a talented writer like you-Happy Sunday -Charma
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:05:00 AM
    This piece was a bit scattered when I read it, perhaps I am not used to your style of writing dear, I took a scond read, it is unique in its own style and I appreciate that. Cindy

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Cindy..thanks for reading.. search deeper behind my abstract words and you'll find each emotion-Charma
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Charma, this poem is superb. You really nailed the theme - ah, it sure is bittersweet too.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much for stopping by Chris
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 6:27:00 AM
    My goodness this hit hard for me. "A journey on short lifelines", indeed. Fantastic!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Drake :)
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 2:44:00 AM
    This is just amazing Charma.It is going to my Favs.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/11/2012 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Kash :)