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Below is the poem entitled WATCHING A SUMMER STORM IN DOYLESTOWN which was written by poet Vee Bdosa. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I was laid to rest, 
my death keeps getting better.
If you find me here, you know, I'm yours to keep.
I could try to say 
I love you in this letter,
or pretending you are here, sing you to sleep.

If the world was mine,
I find it quite amusing,
I would give it all away, to see your eyes,
I would save your life,
and everything you're losing,
all because you never see who's telling lies.

I am just as dead
as is your heart each morning.
If the wind has blown, you know I will be there.
I will touch your life,
without much of a warning,
never look for me, just know I'm everywhere.

I'm a summer storm,
my hope is crashing thunder.
I'm a lightning bolt, my love is five alarm.
if I rain all night,
it's just a spell I'm under,
you should know I'm dead, and won't do any harm.

I'm a little boy.
An old man getting younger.
All I have is how I know how things should be.
We still want the world
to live in death and hunger,
yet I love your eyes, when your eyes look at me.

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  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:49:00 AM
    I am re-reading your poems that I put into my favs. This is so beautiful, I certainly could not have done better. I love this theme, I am the storm. Perfect. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 5:41:00 PM
    I put this one in my favs! Loved it! Please don't let my teasing scare you off. I can just so easily relate to your poetry. Are you in the music business? I have about 8 or 10 song lyrics I have written in the past. They are published as poems but never set to music. I don't have those connections. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 5:39:00 PM
    Hi Ron, there are some really wonderful lines in this one, (you better be careful you'll capture my heart, yet my 'hope is crashing thunder') wonderful lines. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 5:17:00 PM
    Beautifully penned, it just flowed, had to read it twice.

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 5:05:00 PM
    ARe the eyes mossy pond color with fire daggers?? just a stupid thought....enjyoed reading today.