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SAPPHIC

PERFECT BLEND

Orange pekoe steeps in an heirloom teapot Novel open, feet on a velvet hassock Charcoal skyline saturates shore and rooftop . . . Snug in my cottage

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  1. Date: 4/1/2012 2:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem taking first palce. Love the image of 'snug in my cottage.'

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 12:47:00 PM

    I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Guzzically Inspired" contest Cyndi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 7:07:00 PM

    Perfect blend, sounding like a perfect afternoon to me!!! (perfect poem!!) :) Congrats to you Cyndi!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 4:17:00 PM

    what a lovely image in such a hard form! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 2:23:00 PM

    Sooo, there you are, loved this! Thanks for honoring me with an awesome entry mon cher!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 9:02:00 AM

    this is one moment i would like to be in, cyn... visual tinges of orange and charcoal blend with the soothing wave of your artwords... what a beauty which will be in the honors' list... hope you are better; i'm taking herbal pills and wheatgrass powder.. thanks for coming around!.. take care and huggles! :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:59:00 PM

    wowowow. I think I like yours better than mine, Cyndi. You did an awesome job with the challenge (do you think it was ok that I did two stanzas?) Also, thanks so much for pointing out to me that one line. Originally I had written the word "so" into the line and then when I typed it up, I forgot to put the so back in, so that was really nice of you to let me know I needed my extra syllable inside it. Luv, Andrea