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Jewish Rhythmic Elemental summoning Dance Music

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Jewish Rhythmic Elemental summoning Dance Music

Fool an i
we lay so incredulously
In a love....
That it seems our sorrows rest in mind
and all is enabled,
now we able,
to weave mesh of this light as we bind...
seemingly caught up in webs of time.

But stood it may
like a shadow 
was the thoughts that attest between us..
how uncouth the prattled battle lay,
all it consumes,
as it presumes ,
to arrest and attest for our lives...
keeping us caught up in lies 'till we die.

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  1. Date: 4/8/2012 9:47:00 PM
    Thanks for stopping by.....STRONG WRITER BILLY..

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 6:09:00 PM
    Billy, hummm, makes me wonder if fool an I are the same person...great poem..~have a nice one ;-)* PD

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 12:14:00 PM
    Thank you for always sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read Billy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 8:16:00 AM
    Billy, creative and evocative. The title is intriguing? Jay

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 5:41:00 AM
    mmm...

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 2:33:00 AM
    Well worked Billy. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise

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    Date: 3/2/2012 2:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    why..... thank you... I forgot others would read it.... ughh im embarrassed.