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Come Spring

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Below is the poem entitled Come Spring which was written by poet Carol Sunshine Brown. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Come Spring

Pods appear upon the sprigs of green reaching skyward 
covered in early morning dew.
Soft yellow petals open and fold down forming a blanket 
upon which the trumpet center will rest.
The sun shining down on the daffodils give a feeling of 
daintiness to the flowers.
One of the most beautiful flowers seen swaying in the 
spring breeze.

A sign that spring is indeed bursting at the seams to be 
born again.
As the spring season arrives and Easter approaches the 
daffodils will be in full bloom.
The trumpets reaching to the sky in a wonderful display 
of beautiful colors.
Again year after year these precious flowers return to us
once more to admire.

Entry for "Ten Minutes Tops" contest of P.D.
Written by Carol Brown
10th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Great discription wonderful visuals Thanks Carlo and hope you are better soon. TLee

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:35:00 PM
    congratulations i am awestruck this is a good poem.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Thank you P.D I am glad you liked it. Thank you to everyone for your comments and congrats to all the winners. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 12:08:00 PM
    congrats Carol on a stunning win for stellar poetry luv.. luv Spring and Nature and u wrote a rare beauty here ..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:00:00 PM
    Carol, , a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem in my contest. :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Great breath of sound by eye! To the sky Thanks for the up lift... Have a great day and thanks for your comment to me as well

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 10:19:00 AM
    I love the beautiful imagery painted of spring. This poem makes you want to go out and purchase some flowers.

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 6:56:00 AM
    Colorful thought of daffodils welcoming year after year, nice rhythm. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:07:00 AM
    A delightful read Carol. Bon Chance in the contest. = Chuck

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 9:29:00 PM
    enjoyed reading today....I would love to have a beautiful garden....have some beautiful plants now....just need more trees I think.

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 3:17:00 PM
    Wow! "Trumpets reaching to the sky" is a brilliant description of daffodils, Carol. You have some amazing imagery of spring, my friend. Winning wishes to you in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 3:10:00 AM
    Thanks, Carol, for your kind comment re My Desire poem. Wish I was entering into Spring - it's Autumn here instead. Enjoyed your poem. Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 6:11:00 PM
    The trumpets reaching to the sky.... this is simply lovely! beautiful peace for spring welcoming. good luck on the contest, carol, and thanks for stopping by :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 5:19:00 PM
    Quite refreshing! Thanks for the compliment

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 3:41:00 PM
    First day of autumn here it came, and it got hot as hell, our seasons here in Australia, are strange as i can tell, no we didn't have a hot summer, till now... thank you S C B

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 2:59:00 PM
    wonderful dawning of spring in these Daffodils Carol. harry

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 1:23:00 PM
    Hey Carol...I emailed Francine about my entry that was 9 lines long..she said we had to adhere strictly to the rules..I just wanted to warn you bc this outstanding poem may need abbreviating..love the first stanza the most..I would enter that for sure!! If you have ever been to Cox Arboretum here in Dayton, that's the acrostic daffodil poem I wrote about! :) Cheers for you! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 1:12:00 PM
    A beautiful salute to the first flowers of Spring. Great write Carol and thanks so much for your kind words on my poem. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Very very good fav lines [Tha trumpets reaching to the sky]..wee typo there..but I could hear them trumpeting! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:56:00 AM
    I sure love the visual of their trumpets reaching to the sky and heralding the spring. Awesome, CArol.

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