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Worried

Is it such a bad thing to be worried?
Worry means you care,
Concern is to be aware.
I used to view it as overbearing,
but now i understand.
He's the one I'm in love with,
I'm not thinking about sharing.
It's the fact that you were so deeply in love,
i want to be the only one on your mind.
She was almost the end of our almost beginning.
I try to be kind.
It's just ill never find anyone like you again,
Maybe if you gave me what i needed i wouldn't be so worried.
Or if i were confident enough to have that talk,
maybe you and her friendship would be ok then.
Of course i turn this on me,
but since theres no communication,
I'm just a tad worried.

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  1. Date: 3/20/2012 7:36:00 PM

    If the worries are there then it's not working... but your poetry is... Keep writting.

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Nicely expressed feelings here by you.Liked the poem.Thanks for your comment at my poem.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:05:00 AM

    A good poem with an excellent flow....emotions pour through the page! Keep it up and dont worry :)

    Thompson Avatar Taylor Thompson Date: 3/2/2012 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Yesha, i'll try my best :)
  1. Date: 3/1/2012 4:08:00 AM

    Well worked Taylor.Thank you for visit my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Thompson Avatar Taylor Thompson Date: 3/2/2012 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always Anne-Lise, thank you for your constant support! :)