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White

(29/02/2012) I love how you convert your friends with kisses Changing their look physically I love how you affect their identities You bring out comfortness inside them gently No matter how bold a color To soften it always what you do White, a conqueror that pure Beware, its power is true
*Inspired by Russell Sivey Contest 'The Colors Have It' Written by: Dinda Minardi 3rd Place :D

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:52:00 PM

    I find that this poem could be read two ways. I enjoyed it's versatility and enlightening viewpoint. Keep up the good work. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 5:21:00 PM

    Never underestimate the power of kindness and a good attitude. I enjoyed this... And I too find being positive far outweighs being negative... Great poem!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Dinda...I luv your White...lovely write :) luv SK

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 4:11:00 AM

    Dinda, stopping by to say good night~PD

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 4:35:00 PM

    This is a great poem! I enjoyed it very much. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:01:00 AM

    congrats on your win! Love the 2nd verse!

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 3:56:00 PM

    a lovely engaging write Dinda.. white is so pure ad elegant.. dignified and charming.. impressive piece luv.

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Wonderful poetry Dinda, white wins the day with a wonderful placement in the contest. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 8:21:00 AM

    dropping by to say hello, dinda.. anything new from you??.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 3:54:00 PM

    congrats on a wonderful winner, harry

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 7:25:00 AM

    sweet cheers on your fine win, dinda..lovely ! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 9:35:00 AM

    Hi...where?Congrats on this top win.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:29:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Dinda! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "The Colors Have It" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 7:06:00 AM

    Congrats on yours win Dinda, and thank you for lovely poem. - oxox love from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 12:57:00 AM

    Yay!! you won! congrats congrats! a deserving win indeed. thanks for stopping by, Dinda, and the warm welcome ;)

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 10:46:00 AM

    Yowza!! A winning write! White, a conqueror that is pure and true...such amazing lines...I wanted to do one on the absence of color-black..I just ran out of time. wahhhh. lol. Congrats again, Dinda. A wonderful weekend to ya!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Congratulations Dindaa on a smashing win xx

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:17:00 PM

    oh, I just read this recently. Glad to see it now on the winners' list! Congratulations, Dinda. your avatar is sweet looking.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 8:56:00 PM

    congrats Dinda on a wonderful write aned win for white luv.. magnificent creation ..luv..

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 7:40:00 PM

    DINDA... congratulations! WITH YOUR CONTEST WIN!! *Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice n ight ;-)*always..pdIN

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 6:16:00 PM

    wow! love this. one of my fave color even though some like to contradict that. Good luck on the contest Dinda.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:04:00 AM

    yes, how true, white would soften any color, Dinda. An interesting write on that beautiful color of purity.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:23:00 AM

    This is something Russell will like reading.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 9:35:00 AM

    a clear, imaginative write, dinda.. i like the style of this one!... a success!..winning huggs! :)

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 9:41:00 AM

    Hmmm, intriguing analogies here, Dinda. I enjoyed reading your poem. I like how you highlighted the idea of using white to soften other colours. And I had myself a jaded chuckle at the double-meaning(for me anyway)of the ending with the white conqueror analogy. So true! The white conqueror hehe.