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Whispering Wind

He looked long 
through the light pink sky
whispering in the wind
where did you go
gone not a trace
his heart in a race
lost without her.

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  1. Date: 2/29/2012 8:36:00 PM

    DAWN, DEEP... AND THE LONGING WILLL ALWAYS GO ON..THANK YOU 4 SHARING, ALWAYS~PD

    mclaughlin Avatar Dawn mclaughlin Date: 3/1/2012 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You D.p ...was written for a friend..he is longing. Not me.x
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 2:10:00 PM

    Smile ˜ Definitely Lost * Great Poe Dawn ˜ Love, John!:) ˜

    mclaughlin Avatar Dawn mclaughlin Date: 3/1/2012 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you John...x
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Dawn. Wish you the best always in your writing always. Love, Carol

    mclaughlin Avatar Dawn mclaughlin Date: 3/1/2012 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol xx