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Sabbat

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Sabbat

Chanting witches stirring the magic potion,
Cackling, dancing, spinning and wildly leaping,
Naked, frenzied, writhing and fortune telling:
Night of the Sabbat.

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  1. Date: 4/1/2012 12:48:00 PM
    I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Guzzically Inspired" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 7:10:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading about this Night of the Sabbat....An interesting way to spend the evening...!!! LOL ! Great imagination and perfect for this difficult form!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 4:20:00 PM
    Perfect Macbeth witches!! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Jack, Powerful job with the form--almost scared me---double bubble toil & trouble!

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 12:57:00 AM
    Magical!

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 2:18:00 PM
    Put Night On Bare Mountain on the hi-fi for effect. Actually, this is very effective all by itself. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Quite a vivid description of the witches you render, Jack. I donit know the sapphic tanza poem form, but this is awesome! Much love to you and Sue, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 12:35:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Jack. Wish you the best always in your writing always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 8:40:00 PM
    Hey, this is pretty cool, Jack. What inspired you to write one like this??

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 7:45:00 PM
    wow Jack this is GREAT.. going to my favs.. and u as well luv.. such a beauty in an eerie kinda way luv..

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 6:32:00 PM
    Right on, Jack. Did the witches kinda hate men? I dunno, but the naked, frenzied, writhing, is quite "spell"-binding....

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 4:53:00 PM
    Interesting work..Must be a contest..Will have to check that out..Thanks for stopping by..Vulture and buzzard are basically the same bird..Sara

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 3:05:00 PM
    How interesting this write really is! I love how you have the witches as half crazed ditzes doing weird things and being nude, frenzied and even "fortune telling" All of this due to the fact that it's the, "Night of the Sabbat." Crazy! Great Work!!